Ahhh, Yokoka, don’t you know to sniff the things you’re about to swallow first? Never trust medicine.

I looked through the first draft of story again the other day, and Yokoka passed out from her fever in that version. I didn’t want that to happen this time because having her wake up in someone’s house would be too much like chapter 2 and redundant. Turns out though, Azha and Misha were still around originally. Huh.